rate_review Reviews

I really liked this story I have to say. You kept up with everything all along the way, the plot, the character development, it all fell into place nicely. I did find it a bit odd that Buffy was so comfortable with William physically in the beginning, but overall I really liked the story from beginning to end....I think I'll go read it again :)

Wonderful wonderful story. It has held me captive from beginning to end. I loved every minute of it and especially loved how Angelus and Dru died. (Not an Angel/Dru lover myself lol) I hope you will continue to write and grace us with another story! =)

Oh good lord, what an absolutely incredible story. I've seen it up for many months, but I resisted the urge to read it until it was complete because a story with this many chapters has to be given full attention.
And I am so glad that I did. It took me three days to read the entire thing, and i almost stopped because I hated Angelus so. But I of course persisted and was so glad that I did.
It is incredibly rare to find someone who writes as well as you do, and as you say that it is your first step into fanfiction, I am to be honest surprised, you wrote as if you had been doing so for years and i am in awe of this story.
I loved that you kept some of the 'slayer' instincts of Buffy and Faith and yet managed to keep them in the timeframe (I hope that makes sense)
I adored the part where Spike gets his memories back it really struck me of the touching scenes when he got his soul back in the series and was tormented by his past, what an incredible way of putting it into this story, again I am in awe.
I just wanted to take this time to thank you for such an incredible story, one that I have thoroughly enjoyed.

wow what a great ending. i love how andrew came into dawns life, so sweet.

Brilliant.

good work. I really loved this story and i'm a little sad that it is completed. it was very very good! Thank you for writting it!

thank you for finshing this story . i realy injoyed it so much, i dont know what more people could want? it had everything you could went great job. again thank you

WOW!! that is the only thing i can think of to say! This was such a good story.

Oh my what a brillant ending of sorts until the epilogue...I'm glad Angelus died but it wasn't as drawn out as I thought it might be but it was good neather the less...Well done HUggles and All that J*******

Having been in a position of a rape victim, I do have to say the end is satisfying.

I am not sure why you thought you would be flamed for the darker aspects of the story. We deal with human nature day in and day out. Hiding from what could be does not keep what is from attacking us.

Good work.
A great read.
I look forward to seeing whether you have written any other stories. You are one of two of the best fic writers I have ever read. I hope outside of cyperspace you are putting your writing talent to use.