rate_review Reviews

First off, I love any X/F pairing, and I don't think this site has enough of them. This is one of the best I've ever read, and I've read some good ones. I love the lack of agnst. I think some writers depend too heavily on it, especially where this couple is concerned. I see the temptation, because both of these characters have dark pasts, and heavy burdens to bear presently, but too much bogs the story down.

You also captured the fun aspects this coupling could bring, the sexiness, the deep connection. And may I say, that sex scene was hot, so completely in character, but artistically done at the same time. I love this!

very nice, it is also a believable couple seeing as though they have a past, and I honestly think Xander knew more of what Faith was going through than the guys thought back in high school.

That was both touching and erotic. I loved your descriptions of the the rainstorm and the cityscape. They provided the perfect surroundings for your tale. I also enjoyed how you seamlessly wove the backstory into the work without interrupting the flow of the present. Thanks for the work you put into this piece.