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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this story while looking for something else. I was curious and I usually try to read all Xander stories so I started reading this one. I knew it would not be pleasant, but I don't think it was necessary to make it so Xander had to be "naked at all times"; "only eat from bowls on the floor and not people food", etc. The sex and blood thing was bad enough, but it made sense that a slave would be required to provide his master pleasure, so I expected that to some degree. I quit reading after the second chapter so maybe you made it so at least some of the slave traits could be reversed in later chapters. Maybe someday I will come back and finish this, but for now I am too creeped out.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! the detail and the situation you have created have me hooked. I look forward to finding out what happens to Xander and how they all live with this. Man, Cordy revenge would be nice to see too, wow. You have some good lead in to great sex and lots of angst, yay!
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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my - just oh, my. I hope you haven't forgotten this story as I would very much like to read a continuation.
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more plz
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hope to see an update is put up soon. cant wait , poor Xander.T_T keep going^_^.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sob* poor xander please write the next chapter soon
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cool story, can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was disturbing but thankyou for sharing. I think with some of the things that have happened to Xander it is a NC17 fic but that's up to you. Great start, you have definitely got everyone's attention. Just a couple of points as I am a bit of a perfectionist. First, where in the Buffy/Angel timeline is this set because you mention Angel's suprise that Xander has two eyes but if Xander had already lost his eye then alot of your settings are wrong as Sunnydale would be a huge pothole, the AI team would be working at W&H, Cordy would be in a comar and Spike would have a soul. Second, Giles does not live above the Magic Box, he has a seperate flat. Third Cordelia's ghost is called Dennis and there was something else that I can't remember when I do I'll let you know. Otherwise keep going and I hope the above doesn't seem like a big criticism cos I admire your work and are just trying to help you make it even better by clearing up a couple of things.