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by TeeteringOnTheEdge

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schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Although I liked the story at first, the fact that Tara ONLY called Buffy "Baby" started to get on my nerves when the word baby was used ten times in the span of two lines...

Also, I was kinda upset at how insensative it was to say that Tara looked better thinner, as though she couldn't possibly look good as she is - be size-positive, not running everyone into the mainstream.