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for Passion in the Desert

by dayrunner

person rngrdead
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful tale - I do hope there is more to come

Kudos dear writer. Your attention to detail, your descriptions of the setting, and your ability to create a picture of *real* emotions... All truly wonderful

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person Lina
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! Awesome story!!!
person Christine
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is really interesting so far! I'm really looking forward to what is coming up next.

I have a question though...have Gwill and Anxo ever met before or have they only seen each other before?
I can't wait until the "courting" begins...hehe...that will be good.

Lots, and lots more please!
person AddictedtoBuffy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Interesting set up. I like how you have immeadiatly set the scene and have also set up two other parties who will be jealous of the main pairing. I like the culture inherent in your story and rituals its great. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Keep going

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