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for Breathless

by TDK

person Naomi
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. He's finally found her. Yay!
Can't wait for next update =)
person crazy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, well thanks for the update. however don't let it mess up your job. lol will look for more later on in the week.
person crazy
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i guess there has to be a bad breakup so there is a need for spike to protect her. *pout* thanks for the quick update.
person Naomi
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love that you update so frequently. Well done for this chapter.
Riley's a big lummoxing ox! She needs some-one her own height.
A bit muscular..Slightly blonde.. Leather.. Get the hint? Teehee.
Can't wait for next update.
person Peulsar5
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job of fleshing out the story and characters and not rushing straight into the juicy stuff!. It's AU but still with most of their characteristics intact.
person peulsar5
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SAY NOOOOOO!!! Where's the next chapter! WHERE'S THE NEXT &*@# CHAPTER!!!!!
person Naomi
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! If Buffy says Yes. I'm gone. Completly and utterly!
person wildchild
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow good chapter, i like that they liked her song. to marry or not marry riley?
person crazy
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, does she say no? does he go crazy stalker mad? does spike get to ride in to save the day? it was sooooo mean to end it right then. update please
person crazy
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good update, loved how she confessed to willow. confessions are good for the soul. and poor buffy having to "help" herself out after riley. what a dick head. it's always ladies first. hell I make sure to get mine long before he gets his.