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for Breathless

by TDK

person k.l.
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, spike to the rescue!
Boo riley! go on, please write more soon!!
person nikki
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
argh u can't leave it there, this is sooooooooooooo good
person crazy
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
will writ more later but omg yeah had to read now late for work bye
person crazy
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok now i can write more, wow I love how you wrote is chapter, (and how you invovled dawn in it to). i have been waiting for wed to come around to read your updat and when i saw it this morning i just had to read it. made it to work with three mins to spare. ok so i had to read it three times this morning. (it was just so good) can't wait to see how everyone reacts to them knowing each other.
person wild child
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so good. I think it will be intresting to see what spike is thinking about all this. flashbacks perhaps to when angel told him of the situation? it could not od been a pretty sight. or maybe what was going through his head. he as always strikes me as a very "nobody hurts my girl". will be waiting for the next update. thank you so much for decideing to grace us with your writing. this has become my new favorite. and could become a standred read for me.
person wild child
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it, really it was great. i love how they are interconncted. the buffy knows angel, spike works for angel, spike and buffy like each other. truly well thought out
person barelyholdingon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
they will meet? i can't wait, but i have to wait. but i really don't want too. oh well, you said i must wait so i will wait, even though it will kill me
person K.L.
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to see the update, and I loved it.
Can't wait to read more! It is really good!
person Naomi
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! Almost 10 chapters Of 'When will they!?!'
It's here. Yay it's here!
person barelyholdingon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is your first story? it is really good. talk about your cliffhangers.