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for Breathless

by TDK

schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn damn damn and just damn
person tammy
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this is good. I just found it again after a while and read all the new chapters. I hope they fry Riley.
Thanks for the updates
person Gillypod
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Babes, I have reviewed on SR but thought I would pop in here too. I really thing that your writing is getting better and better. This was a great chapter and I think Riley needs to be in a funny farm. Update soon, honey, PLEASE - *begs*
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update, and sucky riley changing his plea.
though he sounds a bit insane,
nobody should get a free walk cause they used drugs.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this so much i sure hope riley gets his in the end
person Gillypod
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter babes, but I think we need a little of nasty Riley to add to the mix.
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful update, i love the last part where she feels werid about paying him and sleeping with him. and the part about wanting to know his first name is so funny. I usually forget to ask lastd a guy for last names, dated a guy for about six months once and never realized I still have no clue what his last name was. lol
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay so cute loving this
person Gillypod
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And I thank you too babes. Really good chapter. Let Riley bring it on, cos Spike will so kick his ass. Can't wait
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. riley goes near them and i will kill him i dont care if he's a fictional character i will find away damn it. lol cant wait for more