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for Breathless

by TDK

person wild child
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sounds good, i'll bite.
person Syl
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. You write rather well for this being your first fic. I look forward to seeing what happens next!