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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 8 - WoW! Nicely done and oh so restrained from overly preachy visual of how the world ended with amazing background details and explanations without having long drawn out lectures, or boring multipage blocks of text. Great mixture - you might want to consider offering classes.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 10 - Thanks for having your live journal address on screen. For some reason I cannot access the posting for chapters 9 th 13.
Just finished chapter 10 on lj. Stunning. The set up was laid, so I knew there would be violence, but to have him just finish the meeting. Intense.
Just finished chapter 10 on lj. Stunning. The set up was laid, so I knew there would be violence, but to have him just finish the meeting. Intense.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 15. just finished. More soon please.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this last chap is food for thought. I like how the demons are more humane than the humans and how you have turned what is almost slavery into a good thing. Its definitely original and your world seems to be created effortlessly and quite informative at the same time. Please keep going
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Chapter, I like the veiwpoint that humans are better off with the demons ruling them and it is a timely reminder of how destructive to the environment humans are. Keep it up
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please. I hope this isn't finished I'd love to see where you are going with it in relation to the descendants of Willow and Xander. I like how you have Spike as the clueless one as most people give that role to Angel (myself included). Keep the writing up. Can't wait to read your next offering
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome.. its so well planed out and it keeps you captivated and wanting more. I want More!