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person AddictedtoBuffy
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the description of the three in the Bronze was hot more please and the rest is awesome but as this is set in season three Dawn shouldn't be there as she didn't come in til Season 5 but it doesn't matter just the perfectionist in me likes all the details just right. Keep going Can't wait for more
person AddictedtoBuffy
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow That last chapter was hot. This is so different and original I love it. More please. I like how Xander is the dominant one with Oz and Angel while Oz is the hesitant one. Truly original. The pairing is interesting too. Can't wait to find out where you go with this and you really don't like Buffy do you?
person Christine
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

This sounds interesting! I cannot wait to read more, I love the pairing. I love how Oz is a little hesitant and how Angel and Xander are making sure to be gentle with him.

Please post lots more!
person shavin
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This story is GOOD!! I do hope that you plan to write more. I want to find out what happens between the three of them :)