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for Oedipus Calling

by addielogan

person wildwomen
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well... i can think of one thing that will can give buffy that liam can't, *smirking* and hes over 18 so who cares. great story, and like some others i love your author notes.. some ppl need to just chill, it's your story and i for one love it
person Amanda
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
howww cute!!! i like how they are playing and flirting, i cant wait to see what happens.
person Megz
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seeing that this was updated was seriously the highlight of a really shitty day. I love that you aren't having them jump straight into sex and are building the tension, which is starting to get incredibly thick between them and will only make when you put them together that much more satisfying. Great job!
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I<3It!
Teehee, luv the hint of angel bashing there,
"Must skip a generation"

Thanks for the update!
I've been chekin evberyday lol.
I really need to get a life.
Im so glad my daughters at playgroup.
I need a nap, lol
person Naomi
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay lets clear this up first,
1. i LOVE it!
2. I think you'v portrayed William's charecter perfectly.
3. i think yoor lufflfy 2 keep up with stories, and not just forget about them.
But i am incredibly stupid for a 22 year old.
So please, what does Oedipus mean? (Sorry i dont know!)

Naomi x
person aks
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i've read almost all of ur spuffy work n u r definitely d most talented writer around. thanx fr cumin up wid such awesome stories. take care. btw, what do u do? r u in college or sumthin? just curious..... t c
person Amanda
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im sorry if i bugged you. i didnt mean for it too sound like i was going crazy for more i just was wondering, take all the time you need to write and like i said b4 i like your writing and there's no rush, not like i'd want to rush you!!! i just wanted you to know that because when you wrote me back you seemed like you thought i wasnt chilled, im chilled..lol. i just wanted to know and thats not a probablem twice a week, its GREAT! anyways sorry if i made you mad.
person firefreezes
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! this story is developing so quickly. love the angst. love the tension. love "think about jessica alba"--very funny!

and naomi, oedipus is a character from greek drama who killed his father and slept with his mother. so someone with an oedipus complex has the hots for his own mother, or in the case of this story, someone who is supposed to be a mother figure.
person Satindoll
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it!
person Tiffany
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH...too much angst...HA...JUST KIDDING! I love angst. Hehe...anyways, I can't wait to see the transformation that I know William will go through this summer. Great write and keep on writing!