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Iz really like this story and was wondering if you could send me an email when you plan on updating or finishing the story and i am so glad spike is a ood friend to xander along with dawn. I thought giles was going to be a good guy as well but i guess not. What part is willow and buffy going to walk in on and will they try i soell to get xander back or will he go back with no fight.

I really hope you are still planning on writing this story. It was just getting good and then you stopped. Urgh!! Really wanting to see what happens when the Sunnydale crew meets the Mars crew. Also, wanting to witness the chaos that Xander has planned with the Mars' chocolate. Want more lemons with Xander and Reaper. We already know that Spike and Xander had become friends and that Dawn is closer to them then Buffy. Samantha will follow her brother. Stef will follow Xander. The twins will probably follow Stef and Samantha. So I think that Xander's new pack should consist of his mate Reaper, Samantha, Stef, Spike, Dawn, and the twins. Xander will feel no respect left towards Buffy, Willow, and Giles because of how they treat him. Tara is iffy, it all depends on what she does when the two groups meet. Please, please, say you will write more!!! Side note, have you started the sequel for your story 'Wishing Just Makes Trouble'?

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me you're continuing this story. I LOVE IT and would like to read more.

I figure if I ping you enough then you will complete this story. Love the concept and hope there is more to come. We need more Xander/Reaper action. I think that the others should show up just in time to watch Xander kicking ass. That would soooo show them. Then just watch the reaction The dreaded three will get from Reaper when they start in on Xander. Are you planning on finishing?

ooooh, please to post more, soon?!

In this sentence from chapter four:
"Watching as two dirty men hefted Xander and Sam over a shoulder like a sack of potato?s, he fallowed Gouger down the street."
Fallowed is suppose to be spelled as followed and you don?t need to use an apostrophe in potato?s. The apostrophe is used for possession. The plural form of potato is potatoes.
And in this part from chapter seven:
"Xander stared wide eyed at the vast room. He couldn?t help it. The place was huge and unlike any other places? Xander had seen.
It should be written as ?unlike any other place? or ?unlike any of the other places? because again Xander doesn't belong to the places.

OOhh! They are back on Earth, now I just need some good slayer ass kicking (meaning Buffy getting hers kicked 'till next week) and more Xander/Reaper action.

Please update soon.

Ohh wow i realy hope you get inspired to work on this story some more. I'd love to know what happens next. :)

OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BE WORKIG ON THIS STLL!!!!!!! I am i n love and I HAVE to know what happens next... I can't wait to see who eats the chocholet!!!!!! LOL!!!