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for Wishing just makes trouble

by Wingedmerkat

person Storm
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! i'm dieing here! i can't wait till reaper kicks sarges butt!!
person Primal
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great just great, but please teel me you not going to kill all those people,i like that little girl she's funny.
person chibifae
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gawd that sucks for xan. update soon gotta know what happens.
person ICE
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic--never watched Doom--don't want to--but this story is awesome. Please PLEASE don't be like some of the other authors and just quit on a good story, because that's just sad.
person Storm
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DON"T YOU DARE!!! *stops and breaths* THIS STORY ROCKS!!! *stops and breaths again* ok ok i'll stop with the yelling...Just think you shoulld know that this is a great story, one that i will be rereading!
person Storm
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah my review is liked *dances stops as she sees shes being watched O_O'* er *coughs looks around laughs nervesly then shrugs* i'm a goof and a love it! *goes a back to dancing...untill she trips over her cat and falls flat on her face* ... *hand shoots up and says though its muffled* Mes ok!
LOL loved the chap can't wait for more!

P.S. hope i gave you laugh ~_~' -Storm
person Storm
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH please update soon this story ROCKS!! i love how your keeping to the story of DOOM yet are adding your own twist to it. And i don't know how you would work a mpreg into the story but i think that would be cool! don't ask why but i'm a big fan of mpreg. *shrugs* maybe C24 will not only make you surper human but will also change your body to beable to carry a child no matter your gender...just an idea i'm throwing out there for you...

-Storm
person chibifae
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! U just keep being a busy little bee and kick out the updates.
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I am excited to see where this goes.
person chibifae
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your update made my night. I can't wait to see what other changes u make as this progresses.