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for Wishing just makes trouble

by Wingedmerkat

person stasa
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I didn?t know anything about Doom before I read this, but I still loved it!
Are you going to keep writing? Because I think you should, at least one more chapter?:)
person Storm
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah see I knew when he went hyena glowy eyes that he would be fine ^_^ Ok first loved the chapter. Secend, did anyone else see something like wills and tara trying to get him back or was it just me? Update soon please! *gives puppy eyes*

-Storm
person Storm
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU KILLED XAN!!! *CRYS*....wait he wasn't zombie like though he was hyena glowy eyes...MMMMMMM >_> something is up here....UPDATE I BEG OF YOU!!!! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!!! *gives puppy eyes* PLEASE I BEG YOU!
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!! THIS IS GETTING SOOOO TENSE! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU STOPPED THERE!!!! ::pant pant pant:: [takes deep breaths] Ok I'm calm...just gonna...go over here for a while...by myself...to wait...[crawls into corner and curls into a little ball and whimpers]
person Storm
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah update! Sooo want reaper to kick some ass *pokes moonkat* your not going to make xan all zombie like are you! *gives puppy eyes* NO KILLING XANDER! *calms down* OK ok crazy here no sleep will do that to you...anyways glad you updated and can't wit for more!
person Dayraven94
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are an evi lperson teasing me like that *drops to knees* please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon please
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sob* you updated, but just...just....CLIFHANGER!? *weep**weep*


love the story keep it up please :)
person Dina
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! This was REAL good, very cool, man. Drop me a memo when you update, please! Please hurry with the updates too! I'm REALLY looking forward to it. ^^ Ta!
person meri
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
look's around for the next chapter link, pout's when she doesn't find it. alright hurry up and post the next bit. i am waiting. looks at watch taps foot well ?
person AmethystSiri
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, I like this 'Doom' version better than the movie version :) please update again soon :)