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for Wishing just makes trouble

by Wingedmerkat

person Rebecca
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have probably said this many times but LOVE this story and really hoping for a sequal. I have enjoyed many of your stories but most of those have been a while since updates. Doomed and Loving It, Magical Upchuck, The Darkness Calls sequel Shadows in the Light, The Lottery, New Divide, In the Sky, and A New World, I hope you choose to update some of these soon.
person Rebecca
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. So much so that I screamed when you left it the way you did. I hope you decide to write a sequel to allow Xander and Reaper to cross back to Buffyverse. I look forward to the chance of future adventures with the couple.
person Asterlith
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like the story, but there are two spelling errors that I can't help but tweak on: "core" is for an apple core or the core of the earth, not for the Marine Corps; while "Sarge" works as a shortened pronunciation, the rank is actually spelled "Sergeant", sort of like how it's spelled "Colonel" but pronounced "kernel" which can also be blamed on the French.
person shadwdryuu
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah, I wish you would continue it from the end, there is still so much you could do with it. Ah well, Its a very good dtory, I love it!
person Elleria
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this.
person talonora
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man what a awesome story!!! you did such a great job with changing the movie to incorporate xander in it! I can't wait to read the next story you write!!! keep on doing what you do I love it!!! :)
person Wilder
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! your not dead! and now they are back in sunnyhell dimesion... this should be interesting
person yessire
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy your back. I can't wait till the Reaper meets Spike better yet Angel!
person Aewnaur
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay so i'm a stalker.. lol.. following you from tth.. but seriously.. you need to write more of this.. i would so freakin love to see reaper and pup in sunnydale.. lol.. either this or your other doom fic.. please please.. reaper reaper reaper.. lol.. aewnaur
person GGreen
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 18: This is so hot no matter where you post it.

I am still having trouble with Karl in this part. Especially when you describe him as bigger than Xander. I don't see him as bigger. More as close to the same size but more muscled.

I also have a tendency to forget and envision Steve Basic, but then I have a tendency to go off into fantasies where you are writting stories with Karl and or Xander in bone blades.

Adore the set up and relationships in the story no matter who is playing what part.

More Please.