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for Realizing You

by MrsMuir

person RemityGirl
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!!

Will there be more?

Thanks for sharing!
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start. You did a great job showing their hesitation and first time experimentation. The emotion between them is palpable.
person Christine
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I love it!

This is going to be an awesome story...I can feel it!

Totally awesome, and I'm so hooked. That is fine with me if this story is really long, as long as there are regular updates, it's all good.

Can't wait for more!