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ok, me really really likey this story!!!! i am lovin' adorable puppy xan and his mates-to-be are just lovely in this story. but i wanna know what happens next!!! did 'shini' get knocked out too? are they gonna be ok? will they get to have yummy hot loving all through the night eventually? you have me addicted. please update soon!!!
p.s. i would also love updates for 'the darkness calls' 'wishing just makes trouble', and especially 'doomed and loving it!'. you do great crossovers darlin'!! cannot wait for more.

please update, i love this x-over

This story is soooo cute...please keep writing.

OH GODS NOT HER!! I agree with Wufei put a muzzle on her! *holds up a muzzle and looks evily at Relena* White Snake eye huh *shakes head* Well I knew something would happen to make things more frustrating for are G-boys plus two Zech and Xan-pup, But just makes it all that more fun to read! Can't wait for more my dear!

-Storm

Really good!!! Xander is so cute with heero and duo!!!can't wait to read the next chapter!!! please update!!!!!!

More More More. I love this story. And all your others. Update soon.

Camilla

What about a possible emotional breakdown, like a complete one, crying, hysteria, panic, a floodgate of emotions basically? Hurt/Comfort, like have Duo and Heero try to force out what is bothering Xan, possibly having him run away from them to sort out things. At this point of the story, and I really love this story^_^ There should be a whole lot of angst followed up by fluff and a bond being created between the three. Maybe even have Xan get a second choice about staying in this world, and Heero and Duo talk him out of it. I'm basically just throwing random ideas out now. Anyways, I hope this helps you out. I understand the frustration of that cruel disease they call writer's block. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and taking the time to share it with us all. I look forward to new chapters.
Nymph

I love it so far and I feel so bad for poor insecure puppy xander.

Well i think you did good on this one....but i'm not a writer so i guess i shouldn't be saying anything *laughs nervesly* ~_~' however i've always got some ideas running a muck in my head so if the writer block becomes too annoying e-mail me i might be abled to help out some! If anything you should get a laugh out of reading my e-mails ^_^ i try to make them funny, i'll shut up now and leave ya be.

-Storm

ch 9 - This story is lots of fun. I like the other dimension, less likely for Scooby interuptions and / or more creative introductions into this reality. I'll keep checking back for updates.