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for The Soulmate Series

by velvetwhip

person shriek
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The fic was great, the ending sucked.
Why in the name of all the deities should Angel WIN?
It would be better had she killed herself- at least there'd be a slight victory in that.
person Paranoia
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. You're a great writer, and you know how to capture a person's character, the essence of that character, and that's truly amazing, not many can do this. I don't mean to sound too romantic, but I've noticed all your love stories are very one-sided, and it's a bit depressing. Especially in this story. it's great writing, but at times, I feel as if i'm rereading the same chapter, because you are going over similar themes, thoughts and actions of your characters. I would love to see it finished.
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Paranoia. I appreciate you taking the time to express your thoughts about this story. I am sorry you felt there was a sameness, but I'm glad there were things about it that you liked as well. Soulmates is completed, so there's not going to be more of it. Again, thank you so much for your review.
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Mistress Red. I am so pleased to hear that this story has moved you. I truly appreciate you taking the time to send me feedback.
person sammai
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story made me want to cry, so far. Willow is so strong, I admire her, although I wish she was brave enough to tell her friends the whole truth.