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i love this story!

please add another chapter!!!

I hope keep going. update

WOW!!! I had to take a cold shower after reading this one man that was hot especially the part where Faith forces Buffy to strip and spanks the little blonde's ass smoking...too bad you didn't continue!! Good fic!!

ok i read this along time ago longed it then and still love it and i really hope u decide to keep going

Ok, did I say in my review of the first part that the Buffy/Giles "pairing" gives me the creeps? Scratch that, the Giles/anybody not Jenny or Joyce pairing freaks me out (but on a level that has nothing to do with how you write it). It just feels wrong: Giles is what, 45? 50? And the girls are between 16 and 20 - that ain't right... Aside from that: simply LOVE the way how you have Faith walk the VERY thin line between being Faith, the cocky-tell-all-take-no-shit-from-nobody super girl and the disciplined Faith of this story, the one who knows her place - and more importantly - knows when to shut up. Also bringing in Amy (who I never cared much for) and Anya (who is always great fun) was a nice little treat. You changed them just enough to fit perfectly into the story, but not to the point where they only have the same name but no other resemblance to the TV shows characters.

Nice story, well written - will there be more?

Awsome story, i hope u continue