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by Kye

person Daratrazanoff
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep writing. Is the tat, some kind of hold on the soul? So even if Faith has true happiness the tat will keep the soul in place? Maybe have Willow search for similar tats on the web. If it's not can you make it so? Then Buffy and Faith can have all the sex they can handle, maybe put some extra senses and strength and stuff, to bring Faith up to Buffy's range.
person cbscifijunky
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really nice spin, like the dynamic between B&F and W&K. Also, I've always liked Darla's character... so very evil ;-)
CB
person tim
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, now it's going to get interesting. something tells Darla is going to inform Buffy of some of Faith's early activities. great update, continue soon
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought you were never gonna update! Please don't take so long next time!!!
person Laura
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Decent stories are so hard to come by today. I really like this and hope to see more soon. The whole Faith as the cursed vampire has always been an interesting idea.
person tim
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good to see tell Buffy about the curse so they don't do anything rash. it is also good to see Kennedy found someone she can settle down with. great update, continue soon
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww,thats so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and its a good thing faith knows about the happy-clause of the curse
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it
person lele angel03
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*claps* thats so fucking cute..now we just need to get faith's ass in gear...does this mean kennedy is gonna move in with buffy and willow!?
person Doug
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so Very Much for these words!!! Your story is Just a little different. So, on to the comments.
I just finished rereading the 4 chps present, and I'm not sure who to worry about more right now, Willow or Buffy? In no general order: Buffy has quoted herself as '16', but in the 1st chp Kennedy has been identified as not being the older Slayer?? The way the dialogue has gone between Will and Kenn, and about how to express Kennedy herself, she sounded like the older one. Faith was Sired at '25'? I would've thought she'd have been gotten a little younger, '19' to '22' or so, but on the leaner side of that spread. And who walks into a Medicine Man's home and go..."I'm in the mood for a tat, I hope you can leave me something I'll like." Or some other silly thing to say/ask. Because remember, this shaman picked it out for her, knew what she was, and I think very well knew just Who she was, hense that choice. And where Did she get her knowledge of the Curse's stipulation? If Buffy is that young, and we're to understand that Xander, Willow and Kennedy are of a similar age, Willow and Kenn have been going at it for a while, and at a rather young age. So, 2 Slayers. Did it go 'B' and right to 'K', or was there a 'Kendra' here, too? You mentioned Dru, what about any others that have some import to your view of the world (Angel, Spike, the Master and/or others).
Well, you get the hint. Okay, muzzle my fingers, somebody. Thanks again.