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for Play Ball!

by Moonliteyes70

person kinetic-kid
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YIPPEEE!! Updates on Play Ball!!

Thank you Moondancer!! Much appreciated... BUT HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT???

Please, please, please upate soon. I'm glad you finally upated this one and look forward to upcoming updates and stories from you. (I haven't forgotten Rewrite, either... hopefully that'll be added to the update list here soon, also!!) But thanks again for a wonderful story and some hot, steamy lovings!!

Kinetic-Kid
person Just Me
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter and the idea of the lust demon, how this won't hinder their growing relationship when it wears off.
person tim
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what you mean by more. yes short chapter, but nice and hot.
person JUst me
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy F**K that was hot, more please
person Doug
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, short but HOT!! Just do what feels right for the characters. Thanks.
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, what do I have to do to get you to write more? You've got me hooked now. It's cruel to leave us here! I really love this, please continue it. The way you've written Tara, perfect.

Zane
person kinetic-kid
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Moon,

Really, really hope you update this story soon. I'm jonesing for some serious Buffy/Tara action!! PWEASE? I'm tired of reading my own crap and working on my stories, I need a break!!! Pwetty pwease???
person kinetic-kid
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Moondancer,


Loving the story! Love Buffy and Tara together, and always look forward to coming across more stories with this absolutely adorable couple. Keep up the good work, and update soon... off to read the new story you posted!


Kinetic-kid
person Doug
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, "Rounding 1st" bears commenting on. Just occured to me that Buffy's journey could coincide with the metaphor that is a baseball/softball diamond. Just how far will she be when you get us all to 2nd? And then there is the question of her joining the team (as I asked earlier), and "Joining the Home team"? Shouldn't it be "for the Visiting team"? Please keep up the great work.

Thanks.
person SimplyStated
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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