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for Dawn's Fine

by abra

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored this story! I first saw your youtube video "The Art Teacher" and fell in love with it. After watching it a few more times I realized that there was a fanfic that went with it and came to read it immediately. I really enjoyed reading it and I'm glad that when I got to chapter 19 that it was finished. I don't know what I would have done if I had had to wait for the next chapter! This was amazing! Thank you so much for writing it! :)
person vladt
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry for being rude and reading without reviewing, but was so caught up in this fine tale that i just wanted to enjoy the next chapter (and the next and the next.) thanks for the fantastic read.
person vladt
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent update to a very fine read. no pun intended. thanks for the read.
person scarlettlily
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh this is so good and I cannot wait to see the end. I love Dawn and how smart she is and how she gets it all and Milton Fine is a lot of fun too and I want to see more!!!
person purrfus
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 18 - I am sure that in your other life you are a very nice person. As an author you have a seriously evil addiction to cliffies. More please.
person purrfus
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - just finished, and oh boy I'm glad there are another 6 chapters waiting. I am not a huge smallville fan and almost didnt start reading this story; I would have missed so much. It is a great idea and the story is really well put together. Thanks for writing and sharing.
person oracle-man
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the heads up, great chapt. try to update soon kiddo, k?
person jac
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beyond cool, this is the best story i`ve read in a long time.
person jac
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now that, was cool.
person purrfus
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its always so weird to hear James speak without Spike's accent.

lots of fun, I would really like to read more.

Thanks