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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Go into a bit more detail about Dawn's anal adventures.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Love the inclusion of Dawn and I can't wait to see what further degradations Joe has planned for Buffy next. Maybe he'll want the Summers sisters to put on a lesbian show :) Or perhaps Dawn arranges a threesome for Xander's birthday.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intresting, your adding several good plot points. You might want to have someone perhaps say a vamp or someone give Joe a leasson. You help add payback, and over all this is getting more intresting.
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding second chapter (tho I'd love a flashback scene to Buffy's first anal). I hope you don't worry about pushing the envelope, because there's so much more she could be forced to do!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job, just wish you'd written about her manager taking her anally for the first time,but all in all.....more please!!!!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, please write more! I'd love to see what dirty things the manager can force Buffy to do!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote, NOT the end!!!!!