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Well, just rubbed one out on chp 5.... and 6, and well, a couple days ago when I started to reread it all, so of course I began with a fine knuckle-shuffle for chp 1. And you came out with this back in 2006?? Been Along time between reads, dude.
And its why Now I'm making sure I tell you I had Alot of Fun with your `Buffy`.
I've been going back through all these pages of various Buffy fanfics, looking for What I may have written for a review, and re-found and reread your fine porn! And I didn't see anything from me??!!? So, I now had to correct that, as I certainly remember this Was one I'd read before. So, THANK YOU, Very Much, you dirty boy.
But of course, as with all my other reviews, I Will comment >Loudly< if I find too much...UGH!! Typos left and right, spacing and format issues to choke a pony. That said, how you slipped in Dawn and Xander FITS! And I love your backstory for Dawn with school in general, and with how she got Kit and Carlos together. Maybe a bit more of How it was with Faith back when S3 and its fallout along with those parts of 4.
Still and all, you seriously Rock, good writer. Thanks, again.

OMG you killed Joe! And Buffy gets a happy ending with Faith.

I really liked this story and I'm sad to see it end so soon (would've loved to see Joe come up with more humiliating stuff for Buffy to do before he met his untimely demise).

Voyeurism, humiliation, oral and spank
Didn't see any spanking in this chapter.

No, No, No, please please let me see Buffy (or Faith I'm not fussy) killing Dawn and Xander. Please

great fic really enjoying it!

Liked it, but not as much as the earlier chapters. It seemed a bit rushed and not as well edited as the previous parts. Some mistakes I noticed:

?I?m begging to wonder who
?Oh, I?ve had full-sex with more than one man.? Dawn nodded, ?Oh, I've had full-sex with more than one man.

And too much focus on Dawn, IMO. Would've loved to see some more Buffy scenes.

My favourite bit of this story was Buffy giving Joe a blowjob during Dawnie's storyteller time.

Damn, Dawn is quite the minx in this. You're writing another chapter, right? I mean, gotta love anything with Faith involved.

Zane

Dawns a bitch. I really hope Xander finds out and tells her off. Over all the plot is both distubing and intresting at the same time.

Oric 13: big fan of your work, so it?s nice to know that you like my work. But there are only two thing I?ll never write; M/M slash and Incest. I know you did ?Thanks for lending me your body, B?, and it?s a hot story (in its given context), but it?s not something I?d be comfortable writing. But yeah; there will be a special treat for Xander?s birthday. But I?m afraid you?ll have to wait until the last chapter for that.

Nice to hear that you're a fan of my fanfiction. I don't really mind that you're not gonna write Dawn/Buffy - I'm just glad that you'll continue this story. You should write whatever you feel inspired to write, that is what I do.

Happy writings.

Gotta say, the inclusion of other Buffy characters like Xander and Dawn totally makes me lose interest. I'd love a story with BUFFY. Not Joyce, Faith, Giles, Willow and the whole Scooby gang.

Looks like Dawn WANTS to make money like Buffy has. I don't think it would take much effort on Joe's part to get Dawn to drop her panties too. And with Dawn now running the Summers household and Buffy getting into the humiliation soon she'll be dervicing Dawn and Xander too. Maybe have Faith drop in. Or a fashback with Joe and Joyce.