rate_review Reviews

Well, I would so love to appropriately review this wonderful story, however, I'm not sure exactly how one goes about either writing the sounds that this story caused or expressing the feelings aroused to a person who is a complete stranger. You write exceptional fantasy for my bent, not so horrendously graphic or extreme, hideousness is never acceptable, however, the whole house of cards on which this type of play between consenting adults is built has to be love and trust and sweet Miz Sarah Aless, you sold it to the balcony. I so saw and heard the beloveds, Spike doing his bad boy/straight up loving and Buffy in her headstrong/frustrating little girl lip out. Each part of the dialogue was fine, the innner thoughts expressed by each were crafted to complete the story. This was an unusual look at the dynamics of the beloveds, powerful in the need and totally in character for their love. Have no clue in my experience to know where you found the strength to put this one paper; secret pleasures are one thing to daydream, quite another to post outloud to God and everybody. Whatever else have you out here love? It'll be so fun and fine to read more. Thank you for your hard work and...it was some kind of story.

So are you gonna write a dom buffy sub spike one next? please?

Too much spanking, but still so good

your story was wicked

And so is most of the YKYWT series

hope you do the next one with Buffy as the boss!

Oh yes! Chapter 3 was as hot as Buffy's bottom! Can't wait to see what Spike does next. After years of Buffy pushing him around, it's so nice to see him on top...

Hey Sarah,

Sorry I haven't reviewed. I saw chapter 1 and then missed the posting for 2, so I'm catching up now. As always, you do the internal workings, the thoughts and motivations exceptionally well. The way you write, you can almost 'feel' each stinging blow. Extremely well done and it builds well. Looking forward to the explosive conclussion.

As far as reviews here these days, they don't seem to exist. I put a chapter of BA up a few weeks ago, and with more than 1500 hits, I got 2 reviews. So don't sweat it. Or do... if that makes for a happy LOL

Take care
regent

So happy to see you writing again, luv! Hope you've been well, and this story is just... delicious. Love Dom Spike so much... *drool*

BIG OUCH!!!!!! Hopefully Buffy will be getting 'more' soon.

I love it! Keep writing and send another chapter soon. Welcome Back.

Hey Carrie,
Erm I'm a little confused. First of all thank you for your support - I'm glad you'd like me to continue cos that must mean you're enjoying the story right? Anyway the confusion I have is from your comment about typos. Were you referring to this first chapter of 'Something Stupid' when you mentioned typos? I just re-read it and I can't see any - all I can see is some rather rambling sentences and a l little bit of disjointedness I wish I'd fixed. The only thing I can think is that you've gone back and read some of the other YKYWT stories first and those are the typos you're referring to. If so, I apologise, they ended up all messed up aftr the sit moved a couple of times and I didn't go back and change them because that would have bumped my stories back to the top of the page which wouldn't be fair as they're not new. If it is the case that you had ben reading earlier stuff and wantto see it properly it's also up at Spuffy Realm with no typos (other than my own of course). Sorry for the ramble, just kinda wanted to clear up my confusion. Would be great if you could let me know whether it's the style of this one particular chapter you referred to so that I can try to fix it in future parts. Thanx
Sarah
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