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for Temptation

by Virtualpersonal

person Elerrina Rose
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.... *shocked silence*.... wow.

Yay! Finally! So hot... the yum of Spike knows no bounds.
BTW, LOVING the leather cuffs ;)

Thank you very much!
~ Ellie Rose
person isolde
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so happy they finally made a decision, great chap. theyre fucking...but they're not, geez always sumthing. that course of action seems less and less logical each chapter. still enjoyed it, update soon.
person Elerrina Rose
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alley dry fucks... *sigh* we're getting closer!!! Yay!
During the dance when Spike found Dawn and the 2nd boy, I thought he was going to "break both his fucking hands" and he thought he would in earlier chapters :) Good stuff! Slaying makes you hungry and horny and I love that Dawn carries on the tradition.
More, please!

~ Ellie Rose
person April
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love Spike/Dawn sotrys this is the second I've read. I am new here. Your story is great I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Elerrina Rose
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhhh, SO CLOSE! Grrrrrr...
I amend my last statement: Dawn IS my hero! She's awesome!
Ever since season 5, I've always had a little crush on William. There's just something about socially awkward, nerdy englishmen with glasses that gets me :) Same reason I love Wesley. Reading Spike as a re-humaned professor is simply delicious.
I LOVE IT! I love it... More, sil vous plait, MORE!

~Ellie Rose
person isolde
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;_____; i was so sure they would work all that stupid 'morals' shit out and b together. i hate being wrong. geez all this foreplay, when's the main-event huh? i guess i juss gotta wait and c. update as soon as u can, and dont u ppl dare 4get about this fic and never finish it.
person Karina
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god Cas!
where is the rest of temptation?!
i need more and i'm prepared to beg
and beg
and beg
pleeeease pleeease
with kisses and licks
pleeeeeeeeeeeease
person Lis
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story keep writing it PLEASE! i'm a HUGE spawn fan!
person phantasmbunny
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it. such an awesome pairing.
person isolde
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u r terribly mean for leaving it there. u must update. (pls see this story through to the end! *insert shameless begging here*)