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for The Tale of the Horny Ghost

by blindguardian

person hfreak
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*applause*

Great fic!
person Oric13
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! That scene in Giles' apartment was pretty darn cute (and sexy) with an embarrassed Willow and an oblivious Buffy constantly flashing Giles.

I liked the ending, and it was pretty surprising since I expected the culprit to be a horny male ghost, but instead it [they] were two lesbian ghosts (not sure why they both died in the middle of doing lesbian stuff, though). I guess the title of the story should be changed to The Tale of the Horny Ghosts ;)

Buffy?s breasts, while smaller in size than Willow?s were no less perfect
Not to split hairs, but I'm pretty sure that Buffy's breasts are bigger than Willow's (Buffy's got like a B cup and Willow, I think, is an A cup).

Anyhow, definitely enjoyed your story and I hope we'll see more of your writing in the future.
person Oric13
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story! And pretty original as well; aside from a Dennis/Cordy pairing, I don't think I've seen any Ghost/Buffy girls stories.

I liked how they had to show up half-naked at Giles', and that Buffy didn't bother covering up. I did wonder how they could've used Willow's car when Willow didn't have her keys with her :)
person tim
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
something tells me Giles is in for a show. please update soon
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and funny too. I can't wait for more.
person jake
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start..........this is getting good please update!!
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. Write more soon. PLEASE!!
person t
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hopefully Buffy doesn't feel to embarassed to ask Willow about her dreams. very hot start, continue please