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by Bloodsrose

person Aly
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great. i never figured it would end like that but i enjoyed the ending it....
person Barbara
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it up to the last chapter, didn't see that one coming. Hope there will be a sequel. I always like the unusual pairings. Keep up the good work!
person QueenBoadicea
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 This is a terrible tragedy but the ending sounds perfectly rigI doI don't think you should do a seque it it if you're going to do something as cheap as bringing Doyle and Buffy back to life.
person Tara
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you should do a sequel. Please!!!
person QueenBoadicea
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 I like this chapter. It's good you're touching on Buffy and Angel's tortured relationship. It wouldn't make sense for her to leap into Doyle's arms right away. The song was just right, too. I can't say I never liked Riley. I actually was quite fond of him before he pulled that passive/aggressive stunt on Buffy.
person QueenBoadicea
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 Ooh! Cliffhanger!
person QueenBoadicea
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8 Damn! I hope Angel doesn't do anything to Buffy or Doyle. He's way too fond of them both in his heart of hearts and, if he can get around this st jea jealousy, he'll see how good it is for two such people to get together.

I really love this Buffy/Doyle pairing and you don't see it too often. The sex is thoroughly hot and believable. Best of all, there's absolutely no Spanky to spoil everything. Woohoo!
person wolfheart
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it keep it comming. Just one question does Buffy know Doyle is a half demon?
person Sarah
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi i just wanted to say that i loved your fic and i wish that you would hurry and post more its very rare that you see a buffy doyle fic but i there always good but i thought that yours was much better than most
person york
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story, and the idea of Buffy/Doyle. Working Lorne into the plot was great, and I loved how you wrote Jealous-Angel. Doyle was just so sweet with Buffy, and their bed scenes were hot! Hope to see more soon!