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for Love Bug

by automaticbadgirl

person latallien
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Por qu? no acabas este fic. A mi me parece muy prometedor. Estoy segura de que lo ha le?ado mucha gente de muchos pa?ses
person Doug
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this a couple weeks or so ago, and thought it sounded cute. I STILL DO. Please, please hurry with other chapters
person Jane Shadow
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is really great! I love the way you describe things, it really makes it all come alive! Almost like I can actually feel what is happening (in a non-sexual way... ok maybe a little bit of a sexual way too...) I hope you add the next part soon, because this is a really great fic. Keep up the good work!
person automaticbadgirl
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I know what you mean about the coitus interruptus, (I think I'd be a lot less understanding in Faith's position) *but* I am building towards a bigger, hopefully better confrontation between these two.
person QueenBoadicea
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 Ooh, this was such a great beginning! I'm a little annoyed at the coitus interruptus but I often put them into my own stories so I can't complain.:D