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person Lissa
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww darn If If I had half a brain I would have know you were going to re-do this eppy. Then I could have asked you to make Lissa a better baddie.
My -name-sake... The most pathetic bad guy in Buffy history. Aww well. I don't blame you... I blame Joss. lol And what's-her-name.... Ashantie? (I know I spelled that wrong...of well)
Still a good job (pathetic Lissa and all). Xander's line about Willow gaying him up twice as funny now. I just wish he could make-up with her. Or at least talk to her. Let her know what is wrong.
anyways...great job. Still reading even if I'm bad about feedback.
person Kiristeen
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you made me cry! What can I say, wow! I love this chapter.

had to grin at the scene switch at the beginning. Where you turn the buffy Spike scene into xander spike -- yes, I noticed you hinted the other one took place. Still, it had the same air about it. Musta been kinda like deja vu for Spike. lol

It was the poem at the end that got me. I think it was the fact that Xander was readin, fi, finally. Accepting -- or getting there, anyway.

Kiri

person NEONEX
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story as much as the prequal. i know i keep saying that, but you are a very talented writer! I am a true Spuffy fan and I never did like Spike and Xander together, but then I read the prequal and it all changed. I am still a spuffy fan but now i like the Spike/Xander pairing. Can't wait to read more. Please update ASAP.
NEO
person Kiristeen
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! Loved this one. Especially the Xander reassurance of Spike that he was *not* on a date. That was a good touch.

Poor Spike, so torn. Xander too, for that matter.

Loved the ending scene most of all.

Kiri
person Water Angel
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Just wow. So Xander finally knows what spike did. Thats good. very good. Oh by the way last chapter. really good too. really liked your first story too.

update soon
person Kiristeen
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!!!!!!!!!!! I *so* cannot believe I missed that little bit. It was all there, separated by chapters, but there all the same! Way to go! The ante has now been upped and all players are called. LOLOL

Kiri (sitting on the edge of her seat)
person Sparky
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. wow, xannie has some power doesn't he? i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon! :-)
person Kiristeen
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Ooooo! Oooooo! ::okay done with my Horshak moment:: lol LOVED this part. Loved Xander's reaction to Spike's "joke". Loved the way Xander ended up reacting to the chip firing all by its lonesome. Basically pretty much loved the entire chapter! : )

Kiri
person NEONEX
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lied? Nice twist. I really hope Xander gets his Spike back, but what will happen to this worlds Spike? I mean his demon sees Xander as his, and he might be developing feelings for Xander, so what will happen with that? Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more. Please update quickly.
NEO
person Sparky
schedule June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh, what did Hallie lie about???? please update soon! I cna't wait for the next chapter! please update soon!