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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this series, but with the two spikes comming together, it's getting a little hard to tell them apart in writing. Sometimes I can't figure out which spike is which. I don't know how you could fix that. Maybe have one of them called Will? Or give them numbers? Or maybe just mention more often in your writing which spike is blonde and which is brunette. In the latest chapter, until he came back, I didn't know which spike had stormed out of the room and which Xander was talking to.
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AH, new chapter please:)
still luvin this story, keep it comin
still luvin this story, keep it comin
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this from the beginning and there have been some awesome sex scenes. But the end of chapter 54 takes the cake. I absolutely loved it!
For more serious and useful feedback: I really like your characters. They're different than what we have on the show, but they're so believable. You've created a well developed parallel universe. You also use humor to great effect -- it's not overdone, it's not inappropriate, it's natural and true to character. Well done.
For more serious and useful feedback: I really like your characters. They're different than what we have on the show, but they're so believable. You've created a well developed parallel universe. You also use humor to great effect -- it's not overdone, it's not inappropriate, it's natural and true to character. Well done.
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August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yummm! : ) Been off finally giving in to reading HP fic. Made it kinda nice coming back to about 10 chapters!!!! whooo! Look forward to more.
Kiri
Kiri
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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for more wonderful fic!
I am wondering how they are going to be able to tell the Spikes apart when talking about them in casual conversation (or even if both Spikes just have bleached hair). Calling them 1 and 2 might insult one of them. Maybe give them sickly sweet pet names and make them wear collars with name tags on them to piss them off (one pissed off Spike is yummy, now imagine two!).
Update soon.
ri
I am wondering how they are going to be able to tell the Spikes apart when talking about them in casual conversation (or even if both Spikes just have bleached hair). Calling them 1 and 2 might insult one of them. Maybe give them sickly sweet pet names and make them wear collars with name tags on them to piss them off (one pissed off Spike is yummy, now imagine two!).
Update soon.
ri
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August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I don't want to sound like a bitch, but when are the two Spike's gonna meet? I have been waiting for this forever, please update as soon as possible, I can't wait to see what happens.
NEO
NEO
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bring the other Spike home. I want to see how they react towards eachother. There has to be some conflic between them. Please update soon.
NEO
NEO
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed lately, but I have been keeping up. I feel bad for Spike now that Xander has his Spike back. I know you just updated, but please update real soon. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts, especially the two Spikes. Keep up the great work. And please update ASAP.
NEO
NEO
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, well, this was wonderful! the next chapter promises to be really great when the two spikes meet!! please update soon! i can't wait for the next chapter! and how they are going to deal with the 3-some! :)
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! YIPPEE!!! I AM SO HAPPY!!! Please update soon! i can't wait for the next chapter and their happily ever after!! update soon!