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for Preying On My Mind

by JDavitt

person Kiristeen
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eeeep! and again Eeep! Xander *do* something!


LOL, whew, now that I've got *that* out of my system; excellent chapter! In turns sweet, sad, frustrating, and panic time. I was *very* glad to see this updated, and look forward to seeing more.
person tai
schedule June 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Falls over and dies*

Noooo, this is bad! First you leave me with...that horrible cliffy in but but I was willing to forgive, now you're killing me with this! You are so cruel.

^-^ That said, I can't wait for you to lay some more upon us. You know we love it and crave it muchly, so please more, soon.
person Kiristeen
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::sniff sniff::

This was hot, funny, and sad all rolled into one. Good job.
person Jane
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm so happy to see a sequel; the ending to the first part of the story left me too sad. I hope you update frequently; I look forward to Spike somehow recapturing the memories of his previous time with Xan. Hm, I also look forward to them creating some new memories.
person Mandylynn
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Predatory Acts was a great story and I'm so glad that you decided to have a sequel! Hopefully it won't be too long until the next part? Please? Gives big Xander-like puppy eyes and bats eyelashes like a not-so-innocent Spike*

Great job!
person Cassy
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooooo glad you are writing a sequal! I loved Predatory acts, can't wait to read more of this.