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for A Touch of Jealousy (COMPLETE)

by Echidna

person lilyoko
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG NOOOOOOOOOO I LOVED THIS SPIKE AND BUFFY FIC!!!!! THAT BITCH DRU!!! ARGHH YOU BETTER UPDATE AND UPDATE FAST CUZ I WANNA KNOW WAT HAPPENS NEXT.
person NEONEX
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You enjoy being this evil don't you? I can't believe you left it like that. Please update soon, I beg you! I cannot wait to find out what happens and what they are going to say to them. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
NEO
person Kari Mouke
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well written. I have some problems with it which have nothing to do with your talent as a writer and everything to do with my own discomfort for teens having sex. Sex is good - for adults - bad for children. I wish it could have taken place when they were in college. Obviously, I can't be too bothered with it, however, because I read all the way up to chapter 41? in one sitting!
person chellie
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahh the end of this chapter was awesome!!! i cant wait to read the next!!! please post it soon! this is my fav story of all the ones on this site!
person NEONEX
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I can't wait you you to update! Please do so ASAP. I knew Angel would be Romeo, oh Spike is gonna be pissed! How are they gonna handle it? Update soon.
NEO
person Little John of Locksland
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I openned the story at first without realizing what the story was really about and because of that almost closed it without reading. Luckily for me however I managed to overcome the initial urge and ended up reading the entire thing that had been posted up to 07/12/03. A story that really draws in the reader and characters that come alive even without the allure of the supernatural. Truly a masterpiece of combining the characters we know with the real world style of situations.
person faithluver
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More! it is great! im luvin it! more more more an...angel an spikde...let lose the dogs of war!!!!
person Kiristeen
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Classic! LOL I'm still hoping that Spike'll do something and *he'll* end up playing the male lead. : ) Good job.


Kiri
person chellie
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutley amazing, the love/hate relationship is wonderful. Many times when I am reading fanfic, in my mind I'm going, oh man, I wish so and so would've done this instead.. but with yours everything fits perfectly! Okay maybe a lil more of Angel wouldn't hurt, add to the yummy angst, i cant wait for the next chapter! Were Cordelia and Spike a thing???? Please please keep on going, i cant wait to read your other stories as well!
person chellie
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
just a comment, is it just me or does chapter 12, or 30-31, stop short? it seems like theres some part missing, after Buffy finds Spike in the shower at the cabin on xmas.