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just found and read you fic. loved it to bitz. Than-you for not having freaky sex like rape and such. so many fics do and an AU didn't really need it. your work was primo. thank you

I loved thic!!ic!!!

Thank you for this story. I loved it. I hope to read more from you in the future. :)

I just have to say I really engoyed this story. I could hardly wait for the finel chapters. It's well writen- it's AU, but it's still the charecters I know from BTVS- which is not easy to do- and you did it great! keep it coming! and thanks....

I've followed 'A Touch of Jealousy' from the first posting on your site, it has been consistantly excellent and thoroughly enjoyed. I look forward to reading more of your work as your writing talent is obvious.

I have really enjoyed this story, not too much ust. The writing has been good and the plott interesting. I saw this story first on Spuffy archives but didn't start reading it until last week and you have had me hooked since then. The dialogue between all the characters is good and especially between e ane and buffy. It has been fun to be in this good pink place and I am sorry it has to end soon....oh well, hopefully you will find us another great pink place . The loves scenes have been good but some have been a bit 'routine' and Buffy and Spike are never routine whatever the genre you place them. I am going to read chapter 47 and 48, but I am trying to hold out. Anyway carry on the good work, its been a fun ride

ACK! please, if you have one shred of humanity in you, update this story! I have
been glued to my computer the past rea reading and rereading this story! I love the way you take the
whole cast and just...wow...make magic with the characters! Yeah, I'm a raving lunitic, but can you blame
me? Don't think so! Please update and much love!
-Kirby
PS: Can we get a little shower action in the upcoming
chapters? Just a suggestion!

This is really getting good. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I can't stand Dru and her ramblings, they bug me. Anyway, please update soon.
NEO

Oh my god. You're evil! How could you leave it at that! Please please PLEASE update! I can't wait o find out what Buffy's mom and Giles have to say about the two. Please kepp the chapters coming. Great job!

in june i read through the chapter where they just had sex, and buffy's mom walks in, and i kept checking for updates afterwards because i absolutely love this story! then i went to camp with my family, got back, first thing i did was find this story again and check for updates. i was pleasantly surprised that you wrote this much in just about two weeks. so i read the other 10 or so chapters. i really hope you update again soon because i want to find out what will happen now that giled jod joyce find out that spike isn't gay, not only that, but having sex and probably being in love with buffy. i do have a few things to point out though. like someone else said, you use the terms "petite blonde" and "the redhead" and "bleached teen" and "the brunette" and stuff like that. also, some of the things happening were a little too predictable. as soon as i read the part where spike says ?It was kinda strange for me too when my da first started going ou may maybe i'm just good at guessing, but i knew right when he said it that buffy and spike's mom were going out. anyway, this is getting kind of long, and i'm sure you read this all the time, but please hurry with the next chapter! i can't wait to see how their parents react.