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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
plzzzz more iz there a nuthur chapter after 14 brill fic so far
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fallout -
Oooo...this is getting interesting! The aftershocks are amazing...can't wait for more!
Oooo...this is getting interesting! The aftershocks are amazing...can't wait for more!
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very cool.When do we get to read more.
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SO GOOD!!!! Keep it going! I love a submissive Spike. LOL!
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Very sneaky of Xan, using that dart! So, where is he going to take Spike? The mansion? I hope you update this soon, this is such a kick-ass story!
Cassy
Cassy
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June 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, one million-gazillion times, thank you. This is such an awesome story! I normally don't read long or multi-part fanfic, but, by the end of the second part, I was too hooked to quit. Please, say you're going to update this soon.
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: The Joining
Awesome job...I got hooked on this fic about a week ago (I think...but I've been reading so much from so many places it's hard to tell where I've been and when) and am still hooked. This is a great twist on reality and I love that you made a plot line like this. Great work and keep it up!
Mandylynn
Awesome job...I got hooked on this fic about a week ago (I think...but I've been reading so much from so many places it's hard to tell where I've been and when) and am still hooked. This is a great twist on reality and I love that you made a plot line like this. Great work and keep it up!
Mandylynn
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was so SO (!!) good. There was so much emotion, and feeling, and it flowed so beautifully. That was amazing. That was *really* great. Gah, now I can't wait til the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when the blood wears off of Xander, and .... awww, poor Spike. He's already half in love. This is gonna hurt. Best chapter so far. And not just the sex, the whole tone is amazing. The language. Yeah, that's what I mean.
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're able to write such scathingly hot scenes that aren't just hot sexually, but so emotionally charged as well. The thoughts, and feelings, of both Xan and Spike are so real and perfectly written.
Post more now!
Post more now!
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! That's ... WOW. Nice. Naughty/Nice, of course. Whew.
I think a beta reader would improve your fic, your sentences sometimes shifted subject, but other than that... wowwow.
Please, ma'am, may I have another?
I think a beta reader would improve your fic, your sentences sometimes shifted subject, but other than that... wowwow.
Please, ma'am, may I have another?