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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dang. i was actually expecting this to be not-finished when i got to the last couple chapters. as i read 16 i got hopeful again that it was done, though. i just was expecting it to end up back where it started, but it's all okay. this was a good story, despite my confusion and irritation at certain points.~
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear god in heaven, I just finished reading chapter 10A
*wipes up drool from floor*. that was undoubtably the hottest sex scene i have read. ever. In 3 years of reading fanfiction. I dont think ill be able to find one that pardon the pun, tops this one.
very very very very very good work. very good work. god excuse me i need to go to the bathroom now *walks on jelly legs to door*
*wipes up drool from floor*. that was undoubtably the hottest sex scene i have read. ever. In 3 years of reading fanfiction. I dont think ill be able to find one that pardon the pun, tops this one.
very very very very very good work. very good work. god excuse me i need to go to the bathroom now *walks on jelly legs to door*
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has been great!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next one Becoming 2:)
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lemon, Thank you for writing these imaginative stories and I hope you will continue wirting them.
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please update sooooon!! holly is so cute..
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories here. Thank you for updating. ~Lolly~
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really amazing! I like all the stuff I've read of yours but this definetly my faviorate and also the best Buffy fan fiction I've ever read.
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this is got to be the best fic i have ever read. I can't believe the a slash fic with male pregnacy could possibly be this good. Ussually there full of a lot of smut but not much plot but this is without a doubt the best peice of fanfiction i have ever read. You get the characters emotions across so well. this is so well writen. I can't wait to read more.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was definetly the best buffy fan fic i have ever read. Its really great. I can't wait to read more.