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by skauble

person purrfus
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The best darned garden party ever.
person Syl
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So nice to see this fic updated! This has been an amazing story and I'm anxious to see how you plan to resolve the story and the characters. This has become one of my favorite fics and that in spite of my typically not caring for A/C stories. But you've done an absolutely outsiding job of making the reader care about these characteristics. Kudos!
person TheCharmer
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What is keeping you so long .... I?m dying here of curiosity!!! Please post soon!!!
person TheCharmer
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! THis is definitely one of the best I?ve ever read!!! I just LOVE your Angelus! Please update soon, PLEASE!!!
person javajane
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to say that I loved this story. It was great. You have to finish it. Does Angelus find her? I have to have more.

person Gloria
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read your story and I love it! Please update soon. This is so well written and insightful that I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Oric13
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, your story made me stay up till 4 AM before I finally managed to tear myself away. Have read up to ch. 46 so far. Like I said before: extremely well-written.

I do think you write Angelus a lot more powerful than he was on the show. I find it hard to believe he could get his hands on Cordy with Buffy present on no less than two occasions. The way I remember seeing it on BtVS, Buffy's a better fighter than Angelus. But in this story it seems like Angelus could easily kill Buffy, Giles and the rest of the gang whenever he wants, which I don't consider to be entirely realistic. But I suppose that's why this is called fanfiction :)

When Angelus was comparing Cordelia to the sun & moon, I couldn't help think about that tattoo Charisma has above her ass (of the sun and the moon intertwined).
person Oric13
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first chapter of this and really, really enjoyed it. Excellent work! Extremely well-written - the characterization of Cordelia is just about perfect.
person Sylvia
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read this particular pairing (A/C) but I have found this one to be absolutely fascinating! I'm really interested to see where you are taking this story and love the way you have fleshed out the characters with their motivations and feelings. Very well done!