rate_review Reviews

This sucks total ass

I like this take on "Buffy gets turned after Angel loses soul" senario. It follows Jossverse, but thats OK. This isn't "Buff the Trampy Vamp" who is instantly badder and meaner than Angelus or Buffy got soul vamp who is as tragic, but wimpier than Angel on a bad day. If your story was like one of these I would call it trite because they have been done so often.

You perfect the Joss idea that what you are in life before being turned affects what kind of a demon you become. You show Buffy as a truly confused fledgling vamp that kills and enjoys it when she first rises and wants to please Angelus her sire, but seems not quite working at full mental capacity because of some inner confusion. She wants to please her sire, but she wants to protect those she cared about when alive. She doesn't have a soul, yet her Slayer instinct over rides her need to obey Angelus. This is an interesting twist and it is amusing how you portray the fang gang's reaction to her turning. I want to read more. I want to know will Buffy feel drawn to Angelus? Will her unexpected feelings for Willow make her want to turn her? Will she pair up with Oz during "wolf time"? Please update.

personally i think you should give joss whendon more credit for your story, you basically rewrote the eposodes but with buffy as a vampire. Sorry but i found it rather unoriginal and dull

I very much enjoyed your story. You really manage to capture the humour of the show. Can?t wait for the next chapters.