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for Ordinary Heroes

by Amejisuto

person Oocoroo
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so far i really wish you would write more. its got such a different take on a Xander story taat it just sucked me in. i also loved the detail in the city.
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so very cool! I'm a multifandom geek myself though my DC knowledge has become seriously faded. I haven't read anything in YEARS ever since my mom chucked them. They weren't suitable for a girl my age. PFFT! But seriously why have you not updated this?
person Magewind
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the beginning to this story and am looking forward to an update. I'd really like to see where you go with this.
person Primal
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this sounds interesting. please update soon
person Kitara
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far. It's got a good storyline and I can hardly wait to see more.
person mem
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!! this looks so great, I wanna know more . . .

mem
person Kalrani
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where do I start? This story is so well written, and it blends the two worlds together so well....I'm in awe. I only wish I could capture the characters as well as you do. I love how you integrate the batman characters slowly, through a series of "random events", so that they meet and get familiar with Xander. And I love the idea of him becoming a paramedic, he could help at the scene of the crime and encounter the caped heroes. But seriously, I really really want to see your next chapter....oooh, you could make Xander be in the wrong place at the wrong time and get attacked by the Joker, or Harley Quinn, or Poison Ivy, or someone, and help frustrate them long enough/ make a distraction for batman and nightwing and robin to come in and defeat them.....that would be loverly. Maybe using his Xander babble??? And then getting hurt and having to recover at the Wayne mansion b/c he finds out their identities? When are you going to bring in Alfred, and the training???? I'm on pins and needles.........purty please write soon!
person ranni
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cool... Hope to see more soon!
person Weee
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't like to rewiew because usually I don't have much to say. But ne way. I loved your story so far and do hope that you continue it. --heart--
person Littlest Coyote
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Origional and I have to say I like it. Love to see Xander in a setting where he can grow and shine. Please do write more.