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October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know it's been a long time but don't leave your readers hanging with a never finished fic. You have a great style, please give this fic an ending.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry for not updating. Somehow I'm blocked. I was told that the problem will be solved by march the 1st. I'll try to work on chptrs until then.
believe me, I'm pissed about it too!
believe me, I'm pissed about it too!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Buffy still doesn't get it does she? Spike wouldn't mind how she looked; he'd probably just threaten to kill the wanker that did it. More story please.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first of all: I'm a norwegian without a dictionary....
but I really love your fic so far!!! I can't wait to read the next chapters.... please don't make me wait....
you have capured just the right spirit!
thanx!!!!
but I really love your fic so far!!! I can't wait to read the next chapters.... please don't make me wait....
you have capured just the right spirit!
thanx!!!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's always interesting that Spike thinks Buffy doesn't want him and Buffy thinks Spike doesn't want her. Pretty silly. I hope Xander sorts out Spike's brain.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of having Spike as a singer! He could actually have some fun.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like the story very much, it is well written and I like to read more
thank you
thank you
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to come back and say sorry about mispelling your name!!!
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Maybe I need a beta for my comments!
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Maybe I need a beta for my comments!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Serena
I got to chapter two but I wanted to point out that you have several spelling errors. A beta is helpful in these things. For example. When referring to Angel by Spike's name for him it is spelled "Ponce" and not "Pounce" which is a verb. Also, Buffy could "counsel" and not "councel". I stopped reading because when you have spelling errors like that it makes it hard to enjoy your story. I think the story you are writing so far is interesting, but you should probably run spell checker and get a beta.
I got to chapter two but I wanted to point out that you have several spelling errors. A beta is helpful in these things. For example. When referring to Angel by Spike's name for him it is spelled "Ponce" and not "Pounce" which is a verb. Also, Buffy could "counsel" and not "councel". I stopped reading because when you have spelling errors like that it makes it hard to enjoy your story. I think the story you are writing so far is interesting, but you should probably run spell checker and get a beta.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF are Buffy and Willow and Dawn still doing in their house? Are you going to explain to us how that happened? I saw that somebody already gave you the advice about getting a beta; it's a good idea. If you write more, I'll read it.