rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed this story a lot, i really would like to say your a very good writer and have so far read two of your stories and loved both. keep up the good work ^_^

wow, i like the note at the top. good lord i hate having written a story, or currently writing a story where a character is out of normality for the canon version, or has a completely different personality due to things like say, a different childhood. And you get reviews like "he would do that!" or "she would never react that way!" or "that doesn't sound like it would happen in the show/book/anime" ugh why can't stupid people understand fanfictoin is titled as such for a reason. it is fiction of a show/book/game etc. written/drawn(fanmangas) by fans of shows or fans of the 'canon' versions of the characters in fanfictions. silly people...if you want everything to work out just the way the character would in canon...well go watch canon, in the mean time creative people who enjoy writing will go ahead and take great story lines and expand them or change them to go in a direction not shown in canon so that the amazingness of things like good shows like buffy, or great games like final fantasy, or animes like naruto and one piece as well as books like harry potter. i've even come across great cartoon stories in kim possible and teen titans. silly people, if everything stayed canon the interest in the particular show or whatever would die. it would get old, but wth fanfiction that doesn't happen because there's always some new plot to write, or some new way to work out an already used plot, new pairings to try, different times to make stories appear. ANYWAYS i really enjoy all of your stories. i'm in love with 'what if?' and am hoping you update soon and keep updateing for a long while with lots of great chapters. and duh i'm working on reading shattered souls, then i'll move on to 'family' then 'different endings' and then 'a witch in la'. you're a great writer, and up until i read your stories i never liked stories that speak of the characters actions in the ways like you do with "tara stares at the slayer with a grin as she closes the door." i usually only liked reading stories written like normal books like "tara stared at the slayer with a grin as she closed the door." but reading your story style left me with the ability to deal with that little pet peeve of mine. great stories, and bravo on your work! i hope you keep it coming because it's too good to keep it locked away in your head...there surely must be many 'plot bunnies' in your head.

great ending, I can see Buffy wiping both Tara and Anya out after one of her rougher slayer nights.

that poor hospital staff having to deal with the wrath of Buffy, but at least everyone is okay, and now comes the fun part of telling Dawn about the new relationship. great update

looks like the family is starting to find its way back together, too bad that it took a tragedy to bring them together. great update

damn, just when Anya gets her girls together and this happens. hope everything turns out well. great update

looks like Buffy is in over her head in this relationship. between Anya and Tara, Buffy won't stand a chance having to deal with two strong women. great update

I don't think breakfast is one of those meals you get with dessert, but something tells me Buffy is going to get it and then some. great update

leave it to Anya to finally have enough and kick Buffy in the ass to realize how much she has been hurting herself and Tara. can't wait to see what they get into after breakfast. great update

oh boy, Buffy is in shitload from Tara and Anya when she healthy enough.