Reviews for Butch - Buffy/Angel - AFF Fiction Portal

person Nicky x x

schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Just re-read the fic and wanted to add another "constructive" review as someone who likes the idea of two women + their toys ;) Fuffy is fuffy and as long as the writer is good [which you are AO] any situation involving the slayers that is NC-17/R is sexy! :P
[Sorry, I just dislike the fact that people hide behind "constructive" to write things that aren't pleasant. My philosopy is review if/what you like & email if you don't].
A lot of the time, in the show, we are reminded that there is a fine line between pain + pleasure. As long as both parties are consenting; it's all fun and games :) Both slayers certainly had fun in the fic. Buffy knew Butch'd hurt & did it anyway :D I liked the fact that Faith had thought & planned it out and the way you'd written it, had me almost as excited as Faith was when Buffy returned home!

I won't continue, for fear of spoiling the fic for people who read reviews first - but as for the line, "Damn! If Butch was real, I think it just twitched." -- I thought it was funny - LOVED IT :D - It reminds readers how sexy Buffy is... to anyone & anything :) Great job :thumbs up:

person Poet

schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Ok i like both chicks and dicks... just usually not on the same person. Cause trannies... ew. Seriously. I just think strap ons, regardless of the situation or the author or whatever are hilarious! THat being said, this fic was great. Your Faith voice was killing me! the word 'dong' just cracks me up everytime. And yeah at the same time it was still kinda sexy too. And that is the mark of a good author. Some one who can make something work universally... it may be different for everyone but you can't deny it's well written, well paced and a good read.

Now that the PWP is out of the way... back to that other fic you got going!

person Dylan

schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM

"[Sorry, I just dislike the fact that people hide behind "constructive" to write things that aren't pleasant. My philosopy is review if/what you like & email if you don't]"

Wasn't trying to be constructive, so no hiding going on ;)

To review: To examine with an eye to criticism or correction. To write or give a critical report on (a new work or performance, for example). A report or essay giving a critical estimate of a work or performance.

Nowhere there does it say...to only leave nice thoughts and opinions and float petals around the author's arse.

If you wanna argue that though, feel free to email me. I don't wanna clog up this author's review page with opposing opinions. She accepted and respected my opinion. I accept and respect that she has complete right to post whatever kinda story she pleases to. But now and then I do (and will continue to) execute my right to review. Just as you do. And by the way...part of the writing process is to know what your readers want, like or dislike. Otherwise you're basically writing for yourself. Which is fine, but then why post it for review? So there is actually more to the review process than correcting spelling mistakes.

Anyway, sorry for stating this here, AO. Really didn't want to violate your review page trying to point out the obvious...but somebody trying to undermine me, and my opinion by stating that I was 'hiding' behind constructive criticism when I clearly wasn't...isn't something I can just sit back and accept.

person SLIVERBLADE