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this is possibly the best story on this entire board, i love the originality and the writing is amazing. Maybe im just sad cos the series ended and i have to seek new 'episodes' on these websites but i can actually see and imagine the characters. like watching a little movie in my imagination.. its wonderful keep up the good work.

I love your story. Though I hate Riley in every way possible. I wish he would get eaten. I think that Buffy needs to pull her crap together and stop leading Spike on.She should start training again. I think she is very stupid, letting a man rule and run her life, than not saying anything when she knows for sure that he is cheating on her. I just think that she is stupid adn wants that 'normal' life too much. I would so have Spike kill him. The slave thing is wrong on so many levels. You don't see demons having humans for slaves. And not all demons are bad or evil. Like Clem. He was nice and like a puppy. With flaby skin. Well I hope to read more soon.

Thankfully she didn't back down completely. It would be too much to expect her to bounce back from all the damage Riley has done so quickly.

I have this weird feelign that part of the reason Riley is so desperate to keep her is that he would lose his position if he lost her. Or he would lose the impression of power if his wife divorced him.

I like this story. More, please.

I love it!!!

Buffy is a much a slave to Riley as those vampire girls. The only differences is that she made herself a slave and that she can break out. Looks like even monor exposure to Spike is starting to make her think.

I like it so far. I hope that Spike can help turn Buffy back into the strong person who she was before.

Looks like Buffy's rabid desire for nrmalcy has come back to haunt her. Not to mention she's lost the will to fight back. I can't wait to see how she manages to become a fighter again.