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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story and awesome chapter. keep writing, you're keepin me on the edge of my seat waiting. great job!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've stopped reviewing this story over at TSR mainly because of certain things that have absolutely nothing to do with you or this story -- but rather some of the things that are happening over there. I'm delighted with the way this is progressing -- and how you get into her head as she descends into something that is so taboo. This is a good story and I'm really glad you decided to post it here. Keep up the good work.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh, this could be the begining of a very beautiful SMUTTY series... hopefully :P I cannot wait for the smut to begin as you probably can tell and you are fast becoming my favorite author! I check in every night to read a new chapter and even though you have been good to us and have been updating constantly I still cannot contain my excitement and it seems like FOREVER between updates but then again, when a fic is this good, that's bound to happen :D Anyways, hope to read more soon! Keep up the amazingly amazing work!!!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That. was. AWESOME!
hehe. i luved that. Buffy wasn't the only one aroused. lol. i can't wait for more!!!
hehe. i luved that. Buffy wasn't the only one aroused. lol. i can't wait for more!!!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh wonderful keep going...
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG i want them to go at it already and get rid of the sexual tension. lol its driving me freakin insane! I still love the story line!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whhhhy did Buffy 'push him back into the closet'?? gah! lol more please :)
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! poor william :(
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I'm constantly checking in on it....And I will until you end it...I have seen the Movie Flowers in the Attic and it does seem a lot like it but I love how you have added everything perfectly in to make it seem not so much like the movie..thank you for writing this wonderful story...hehe...
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not entirely certain why, but these lines right here:
Just before Will blew out the candles, he looked at me with a strange expression on his face. It looked desperate, but I couldn?t tell what he was longing for.
are possibly my favorite in this entire chapter. I can't figure it out. Maybe I like the idea of William looking at her desperately because he wants her? Anyway, for some reason, I liked that line better than the minor smuttiness, though I liked that as well :) I adore this story, and I'm definitely thinking I like your version better than V.C.Andrews' version, that's for damn sure. Keep writing, since you do it so well! :)
Just before Will blew out the candles, he looked at me with a strange expression on his face. It looked desperate, but I couldn?t tell what he was longing for.
are possibly my favorite in this entire chapter. I can't figure it out. Maybe I like the idea of William looking at her desperately because he wants her? Anyway, for some reason, I liked that line better than the minor smuttiness, though I liked that as well :) I adore this story, and I'm definitely thinking I like your version better than V.C.Andrews' version, that's for damn sure. Keep writing, since you do it so well! :)