rate_review Reviews

so good, i love this story, please keep updating!

I avoided reading this story for a long time, because I have a big brother and can we say YEECH? But I absolutely love the story! I read it all last night instead of, oh, say... writing and studying for the busy week to come... but it's totally worth it. It's really well-written, and their feelings seem very natural and ungross because of the stress of being locked up and playing parents for the twins. I can't wait for more! ^o^ I'm interested in the story this is based on, as well.

Great chapter, as always. William is way too judging to Elizabeth. I wonder if he?d behaved differently, were it him to find Elizabeth in action.

Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You do not know the torment I went through waiting for this chapter, it seemed like eternity before you updated!!!!! Anywaysm the usual, as everyone has already mentioned, hate Joyce, Will n Elizabeth so need to get over the whole denial thing, bluh bluh bluh... get to the smut already ::wicked grin:: I know, I'm a total smut slut but I can't help it!!! ::Blush:: (YA right ;) )

I love it, but the UST is killing me. I almost thought that this would be it. I can hardly wait for more.

Yay!! And thank you, I take that as a complete compliment :P I really liked this chapter, I think it was especially special because of the EXCRUCIATINGLY LOOOOONG wait... he he he *evil laugh* I know, not that long, but it seemed like it!! Ugh, I really hate Joyce in this story, actually wasn't that fond of her in the real show either but I think here she's gone a bit cukoo or somethin.. like, dangerous cukoo. Kinda mad at William too, cuz he was all "Go to the attic!" - "Sooo, mom how was your trip?" Ya know! But anyways, this chapter (although without an actual "hands on" *giggles* sex scene) was pretty hott!! Keep up the fantastic work and update really soon! Or else I will be forced to keep reminding you oh, I dunno every hour upon the hour how much torture you are inflicting upon you dear fans...

Love,
you most faithfulest fan ever!! *grin*

oh, come on. they so need to get past the whole denial thing. well hope to read more soon.

Grr, stupid Joyce! Oh well, I supposed any normal human will eventually turn towards their dark side *Darth Vader voice* I was worried when I read your A/N in the last chapter, but I'm ecstatic that you have a update so soon! I'm loving it so far, can't wait to see how they deal with their denial :P Please do update again soon!


Rgds,
Jen

Hey what's up? This story is amazing, no other word could be used to describe how good it is (except maybe synonyms of amazing) and yet that still would not do it justice. I love it. Correction: I am IN love with it! I cannot wait to see where you are going to go with it and of course, I am becoming increasingly, break into a sweat, on the edge of my seat anxious about an actual full on sex scene between William and Elizabeth. I truly hope you decide to continue soon, before I fall off the edge of my seat please? *g*

OH for the love god woman! Update!!! I am absolutely, positively, without a doubt in love with your story, your setting, your characters, your everything! Hell I think I may even be in love with you! And I would be more so if you, oh I dunno, updated? Really soon? Awesome story mate, can't hardly wait to read more!!