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for Dominance

by boundlenore

person feelfree
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love the concept, and it's well written. I would have liked to see Vampire Willow less outwardly harsh, and do the whole playful and seductively innocent act while being deliciously cruel. That's what made Vampire Willow so lovable in the series. I would like to see more of that.

Other than that, the story is great, and you should totally write more of this story. I want to know what happens next.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, please continue!
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good so far