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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The way you wrote Spike's realization that he is thinking of having sex with Buffy and what it could mean was awesome. It's kinda like the dream in the actual show when he wakes up with a start but it's also completelsy different and right for this story that he is with Faith at that moment. Great chapter (maybe I'm reading too much into your writing.. if so sorry about that:))
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And here I am asking myself again why he wouldn?t snap her head exactly in that second. It?s not very believable. But for the sake of more narrating, let?s pretend you?re right.....
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I'd rather be fighting you anyway." I loved that you brought that line. It kinda shows the weird bond the two have. And Buffy taunting Spike at the end was really funny.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting and well written. More please!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hm was it faith herself that somehow killed joyce? finally buffy and faith are gonna face off for the first time. can't wait
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man this faith is suspicious I hope Spike will be able to convince her. I wonder who that guy on the phone was.. someone we know?
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the fighting scenes and how you described how she closed down and just run on rage and Spike's reaction to her wanting to kill him.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was intense *shivers* is there gonna be more real soon? coz you stopped at a real mean moment.. it kinda felt like everything was building up to this moment and then the chapter was finished.. I hate cliffhangers! ;) loved the story