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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 1: Well okay. Heavily detailed dreaming is one way to avoid messy introduction scenes.
Does Spike get the book? Will the Scoobies be ready and waiting for Sentenial and Guide?
Thank goodness there are already more chapters to read.
Does Spike get the book? Will the Scoobies be ready and waiting for Sentenial and Guide?
Thank goodness there are already more chapters to read.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 2: Nice to see Spike with a social Life, cuz you can't spend all your time in crypts.
Loved the Library entrance. The upscale pastries were a really nice touch.
Loved the Library entrance. The upscale pastries were a really nice touch.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 3: Wicked evil fun.
FYI - the add chapter link is open, I almost left my review in that window in error.
FYI - the add chapter link is open, I almost left my review in that window in error.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 4: The group interaction is wonderful. Pushing the edge really shines the spotlight on your humor.
The serial killer really works. While boy becomes Sentenial, needs guide, runs into experienced pair, and then hopefully 'discovers' his own guide is good, the extra layers rock.
The serial killer really works. While boy becomes Sentenial, needs guide, runs into experienced pair, and then hopefully 'discovers' his own guide is good, the extra layers rock.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch: Poor Xander.
I'm guessing the wolf doesn't bleach. Do you suppose Spike has been subconsiously trying to match all these years?
I'm guessing the wolf doesn't bleach. Do you suppose Spike has been subconsiously trying to match all these years?
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really loving this. Hope for more soon.
Thanks for sharing!
~Tis
Thanks for sharing!
~Tis
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great fic. Intriguing mysterious and hot as hell
Update soon 'kay?
Update soon 'kay?
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, please. You've got an interesting story building here, and I'm very curious as to what's going to happen in the upcoming chapters. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great, looking forward to more when you get the chance.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting start. More please when you get the chance.