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for Dawnie's Little Kink

by jb2907

person lovin this fic
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i got excited then when i thought it was another chapter! waa! can't wait for more
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So.....where's the next chapter???!!!! You're killing me!Must have more
person CPT Skip
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is one very oddly hot story. And if you get Tara involved... Wow!
person willfan
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! I don't thnk you need to include a third party , though. Ul timately Willow and Dawn should give in and go all out. Would love to see Dawn anally initiated.
person Kinky
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Sorry Kinky,but Spike definitely WON?T be making an appearance in this story!!!'

Ahh, that's alright. I was just wondering what would happen if Spike saw them through the window and decided to watch with out them knowing, and like it. (And not tell Buffy)

Anyway. Good chapter, can't wait to read what happends next with the possible Dawn,Willow,Tara.
person MikeA
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, VERY hot! Nicely done!!!

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Longer, more detailed chapters would be welcome.

person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work. Can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!!! Throw in some mutal anal action ,please Keep it up.Your writing is geat!
person TJ
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In response to kinky's latest review, I'd just like to say that this has been a good fic so far. Please DON'T ruin it by bringing in a certain undead rapist. Thanks.
person CPT Skip
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Is this story hot or what? I love Willow's thinking. It brings to mind the old saying: "Man is not a rational being but a rationalizing being." I loved the white socks, now if Dawnie wore just some thigh high stockings... Lol! I look forward to the next installment of this very sweet but kinky story.